* Air Pollution *
At first we must know what the meaning of the environment. It's every thing that surrounds the human being like air,soil and water.To understand more and more we need to know what the meaning of the environmental pollution it is any change happens to environment leads to any change in it's components.One of the most important types of pollution in egypt is air pollution. Air pollution means any change in it's components increases or decreases.
There are many reasons for the air pollution. This reasons divided to two sources. The first one is the natural source .It come from the gas and dust which resulting from volcanoes and forest fire. The other source is from the human being as a result of his activities like the vehicle exhausts,factories gas , power station and many other activities which man do daily and all of it lead to the air pollution.
Man noted ,at the recent years, the increasing of the pollution of the air and also noted the effects of it on the man life ,but he ignored all that warming which the environment gave it to him and continued his search to be more comfortble. Now we reach to stage that we don't know where we will reach at the end of all of that??!!!!
When we start to search for solutions for any problem it is usually easy to say that there are many solutions for that problem but when we put that solutions under application it becomes so difficult.One of the solutions of the air pollution is to try to use the technology to limited the gas which comes from the vechiles and factories.Try to build the factories away from the place which people live on it to try to give them clean environment to live in it.
Nice essay Nora. It is understandable and organized. Well done my dear Nora
ردحذفTry to correct the following
ردحذفAllah gave us the universe to preserve it and to keep it clear (clean) and pure.
At first (add a comma,)we must know what the meaning of the environment.
(start a new sentence) it (capitalize the first letter of it) is any change (that) happens to environment (and) leads to any change in it's (its) components.One of the most important types of pollution in egypt (capitalize) is air pollution. Air pollution means any change in it's (its) components (increases or decreases).
This reasons (are) divided to two sources. The first one is the natural source .It come from the gas and dust which result(ing)
factories gas , power station and many other activities which man do (does) daily and all of it(them) lead to the air pollution.
Man noted ,at the recent years(recently), the increasing of
him and continued his search to be more comfortable (wrong spelling).
when we put that (those) solutions under application it(they) becomes so difficult.One of the solutions of the air pollution is to try to use the technology to limit(ed) the gas which comes from the vechiles (wrong spelling )and factories.Try to build the factories away from the place
which people live on (in) to try to give them clean environment to live in it.
hi norhan....you have done a great job.
ردحذفyour eassy is marvellous. the eassy has a clear and specific purpose. the main idea is clear and concise. your intoduction charms me. the eassy is well organized. each paragraph develops logically. each paragraph begins with a good topic senrence. there is enough information in each paragraph which supports the main idea.but i think that (This reasons) should be (these reasons).
and (It come ) should be (it comes)
finally...god bless you
and keep up hard work.
hi nouraty, your essay is good.It has a clear and concise main idea. the purposes are clear and specific .each paragraph begin with a topic sentence but some words spelled incorrectly and try to read more . good essay by a good girl
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